First chapter up! I apologize in advance - still in the un-beta'ed stage. Still looking for a beta-reader somewhere... As usual, critiques and comments are love :)
Happy holidays to everyone!
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First chapter up! I apologize in advance - still in the un-beta'ed stage. Still looking for a beta-reader somewhere... As usual, critiques and comments are love :)
Happy holidays to everyone!
This is my very first entry to any lj community EVER, so critiques and comments are very much welcome :)
Title: Chalcedony Series - First Book: Four Seasons
Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Romance(?)
Format: novel
Rating: T
Warning: (in current chapter) mention of nation violence
Summary: (story) In the land of Zenobyie, where the Kingdoms are isolated, alienated, hidden or ruined, there is a child of the lost Element that will bring Light to his home.
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Short Story- No title as of yet
Post-Apocalyptic New York (I've never been to New York, which may become evident)
Sounds suspiciously like a detective story from the 50's.
First draft or whatever, based on the prompt to include:
New York, a child, a convict, a photograph, and a poem
( I sat on a metal bench at 42nd and B-way. Times Square. The City. Thirty years after total destruction and things still haven't improved. I puffed the last drag off a cigarette and flicked it under my foot. I was waiting for someone. This was my job. )
Title: None yet, I'm still coming up blank.
Written by: bree_bee22
Rating: T
Words: 1,716
Summary: Cameron Moody was a simple man with a simple goal: to live his life unperturbed. But when he finds himself morally obligated to help an injured woman, she decides she must pay him back at any cost- even if that cost means his annoyance.
Warnings: I have visited New York City once but I definitely don’t know my way around there, so if I happen to take liberties with facts, try to forgive the smaller ones and correct the larger ones you find. This story is probably cliché, but I’m okay with that. This chapter will probably end up as chapter 2 somewhere down the line if I can successfully work out an idea I have for a sub-plot. Please, tear it apart if you will, but I'd appreciate if it's constructive. Does it flow well? How's the pacing? Are the settings/characters/timelines believable? Am I just wasting my time? (I might argue with you on that last one.) Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading it, and thank you.
Title: The Stranger
Description: Middle-aged mediocre family man leads a predictable boring life until a stranger changes everything.
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How can I explain to you what I myself couldn't understand until the end?
My name is Wade Gardener, a 47 year old accountant who was living a mediocre life with my lackluster wife Helen who I was beginning to suspect hated my guts, and our 11 year old son David, who in an apocalypse probably wouldn't notice anything until the battery ran out in his iPod. I hated my life, but I didn't realize it until a stranger pointed it out. She said that I wore my misery like an ugly tie, and I hated to admit that she was right.
This is the story of how a stranger saved my life.
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